He could hear her clearly now. That annoying humming.
Next, he sensed her moving closer to him. Even in the darkness, her presence was very palpable.
Muttering,he clutched the weapon in one hand and swung it in her direction, missing her by inches!
I’ll get you one day! he yelled.
The mosquito continued unperturbed.
©Shailaja V
Word count: 55
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This is written in response to the theme prompt
‘Pet Peeve’
for Drabble Week over at
Marathon Bloggers
Today is Day 3
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O how did I miss this one? Very cute 🙂 May be that’s not the right word, but you know what I mean, don’t you? 🙂
hehe lol 😀 musquito it was! they surely are an annoying bunch!
The worst! I agree!
Oh he sure will meet my plams one day 😉
Oh I totally relate with it!! I hate them as much they seem to love me! 🙁
🙂 mosquitoes do that.. and sometimes when you whack them they seem to survive and fly away tooooo
He he … Good One Shailaja 🙂
haha! That’s a heart pumping peeve:)
hah he really has a bad aim 😛 that indeed is really frustrating 😀
wonderful write once again 😀
Thank you Rajlakshmi!
hehe what a turnaround from that steamy beginning ;)… loved your take on the pet peeve!
Steamy eh? I never thought of it that way 😀
Haha! Good one. Yes that is one big pet peeve for a whole lot of people i know 🙂
Including me , Simran 😛
hahaha..yes, what an annoying pet peeve this is!
Isn’t it? 😉