Home again- #WriteTribe #drabble

Verdant shades washed over her senses, in waves of glorious green. Her nostrils filled up with the warm smell of wet earth as her bare feet sank into the sensuous feel of softly mown grass.

Go on, now. Take your time.

Jaya turned her head, listening with glee to the voice behind her. Vedant smiled and picked up the first thing that he could lay his hands on.

Run Jaya! He flung it as far as he could.

She took off in hot pursuit, eyeing the twig with tenacity, her ears flapping, tongue panting. She was home again. With him.

©Shailaja V

Word count:100


green leaves

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 This is a  post written in response to the Write Tribe Saturday prompt :
It does feel like home, doesn’t it?

26 thoughts on “Home again- #WriteTribe #drabble

  1. I love it! I was right there in the moment feeling Jaya’s joy. Dogs are so great how they enjoy everything so much and feel it with all their senses. Great post in so few words. You are so good at conveying a complete story in the short word count.

  2. Oh, I love this. I especially like how you started with “Verdant shades…” and how closely it resembles “Vedant.” All this made me miss my puppy dog, Finnegan, too. Bittersweet and lovely.

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