Nature's lap- #Haiku

Shrouded in black silk
Ascending the wooden stairs
She welcomes the rain

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This is my first-ever attempt at a haiku.

I have tried to be faithful to the original Japanese  rule of 5-7-5 syllables.

Be kind in your criticism  😉

©Shailaja V

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21 thoughts on “Nature's lap- #Haiku

  1. I love haiku specially because it’s challenging to touch the reader with just 17 syllables. You painted a lovely picture of enjoying the rain… Even without seeing the picture I imagined a similar scene. 🙂

  2. I don’t know to write a haiku and I possibly never will. I’m amazed at how in such short words, one can express so much. Great attempt, Shailaja 🙂

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