42 thoughts on “Out of reach #MicroFiction

  1. Shailaja, you floored me. You know I’m a fan, but I love seeing you push your boundaries a bit. This might be the most sensual thing I’ve read of yours, and I love it.

  2. That first metaphor really sets things up to be so sensual. And your use of the word “plumb” is so striking, almost vulgar (in a good way). Outstanding, Shailaja!

  3. Wow!
    I had to read the poem thrice to understand it.. 😀
    Just kidding. I was concentrating way too much on the beauty of the lines!
    I read it thrice coz I liked it so much! 🙂

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