Draped in scintillating red
With shades of spotted black
The ladybird rests on green.
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Written for B&P’s Shadorma & Beyond where we were introduced to the American 767.
The American 767 is:
a tristich, a poem in 3 lines. syllabic, 7-6-7 syllables per line.unrhymed.written with the name of a “bug” in it.
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This is a very vivid image you’ve written, and I enjoyed it very much … bravo!
Oh I really like this one–quite lovely!
Thanks a ton. Welcome to the blog 🙂
I agree wholeheartedly with mj6969—love the way color is played up in your piece 🙂
CC, coming from you, my heart just soared 🙂
Aw, Shailaja….now you have just made my heart soar with your sweet comment 🙂 Hope you’re having a great day!
I am, I am. Now that YOU said it and it’s just beginning, the day can only look up <3
I really loved the way you played upon the color contrasts – great little gem 🙂
Oh thank you so much! 🙂 welcome to my space!
you’re welcome 😀
This is lovely. Fun challenge, too!
Thank you Susan 🙂
You make them sound even prettier than they are.
You make me happy 🙂
Thats nice! Love it.
Thank you 🙂
Beautiful poem
Thank you 🙂
Nicely done, Shy
Thank ye, brother.