Tempting Fate

Isn’t she a beauty?http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130812151702/narutofanon/images/6/6f/Wings.jpg

You shouldn’t have, a nervous Rick mumbled. It’s a phoenix.

Tosh! Jonah smirked.

Ariel flexed her lungs and wings, emitting a piercing note. She watched Jonah burn and smiled as her own feathers caught fire.




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51 thoughts on “Tempting Fate

  1. The burnt feather from Ariel brought Johan back before being extinguished completely…Ariel rose from ashes…both Johan and Ariel are connected from last birth and all these were happening before Rick’s eyes…power writing..

  2. Brilliant 🙂 And extra points for mentioning Phoenix 😉 For some reason, they are my favorite <3

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